Archive for September, 2005

07th Sep 2005

Review: Screenwriting: The Sequence Approach by Paul J Gulino

The first thing that struck me about this book is how very readable it is - the style is incredibly accessible and occasionally, in the film sequence-breakdowns, laugh-out-loud cheeky (though I loved The Fellowship of the Ring, after reading chapter 12, I would kill for his assessment of “The Two Towers” but that’s just the old FOMEr* in me!)

The Sequence approach is apparently the approach taught at UCLA (where Gulino is a lecturer) and represents a refreshing change and, to my mind, a more natural approach than the 3 Act Structure though it is by no means exclusive of it. The theory is clearly and succinctly outlined in the first 19 pages then demonstrated by the breakdown into sequences of eleven films: Toy Story “The simple fact is that the script for Toy Story is one of the better ones written during the last century”; The Shop Around the Corner; Double Indemnity; Nights of Cabria; North by Northwest; Lawrence of Arabia; The Graduate; One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest; Air Force One; Being John Malkovich and; The Fellowship of the Ring.

Believe it or not, that’s all I have to say about this book except to recommend it highly to anyone suffering Act 2 malaise - the sequence approach is likely to give you the lateral jump needed to see your way out of that rutt. Of course, this book is also a great excuse to revisit some old favourites, afterall we are screenwriters - watching movies is work. :)

Click here to see James Bonnet’s article “What’s Wrong With The Three Act Structure” (Beginners: only read this if you have grasped 3 Act Structure and - this article is not an excuse for not knowing it!)

*FOME Fellowship of the Middle Earth - The Monash U. Tolkien appreciation society (the most welcoming bunch of people ever to inhabit the Southwest corner of the caf.) of which I was a happy member - it was the only club I joined other than the Choir. Yes, I was/am a bit of a geek!

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06th Sep 2005

Shadowkeeper Progress… or lack thereof.

Well, I promised I’d be honest and report the bad as well as the good so the last few days definitely deserve an entry. Today (being Tuesday) I received the next Nicholl letter and The Shadowkeeper did not make it through to the semifinal round. On Saturday I received word that of the 200+ companies who requested the ScriptPIMP finalists log-lines 37 companies had requested the script - all 37 passed. The strange thing is that, when I look down the list of 37 companies, only a few of them do family films and none of those fantasy or animated ones - add to that that my logline came up in a search on inktip done by a porn production company and I’m starting to think there is a problem with my logline - people are clearly thinking it’s going to be something other than it is… Anyway, it is still with several other companies who do do family and/or animation films and with the Australian Producer who took a concept of mine to Cannes several years ago so there are still plenty of other irons in the fire. Not to mention the Academy’s little ray of hope at the end of their letter: “If past experience means anything, several quarterfinalists will option or sell a script in near future.” Hmm… if Shadowkeeper can be one of 300 in 6,000 can it be one of several in 300? What’s more important is that I have finally found the extra element I needed for the screenplay I’m currently working on - it kind of takes it out of the range of the Australian budget of 1.5m, for which the idea was originally developed, but that’s just not me, anyway. Afterall, if this spec-writer part of my screenwriting career is going to go on and on, I may as well enjoy what I’m writing and this is FUN!!

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